I'm smiling. I'm glad someone else loved it! I've received replies from the handful of people I shared it with heavily criticizing the style, form, etc. Here's one response from a retired editor in NY: <<One of my copywriters fancied himself a poet (and was a Yeats scholar working on a grad degree) and tried to develop my ken of poetry. He'd recite a line or two and asked me what I thought and I always seemed to say the wrong thing. Exasperated, he would say: "But can't you see? It's so obvious!" And I'd reply, "Not to me." I guess I just don't have that kind of mind. He was attending Columbia at night and taking a class with a noted Yeat's scholar whose name I have forgotten. He claimed to have seen something new in a set of three short poems by Yeats. His teacher doubted that anyone could find something new in Yeats, but let him do a grad thesis on the poems. The poems added up to a few hundred words. He did a fifty-page monograph on them that I could not even begin to understand. It was the slow season, so I let him work on the thesis on company time. How industrious he looked! LOL. He left Ronald Press for academia. The last I heard of him was that he had married a very wealthy woman. Way to go!>> I guess I just don't know enough to not love that poem. Julie Krueger On Fri, Nov 28, 2008 at 5:59 PM, Mike Geary <atlas@xxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote: > Thank you, Julie. I loved that. > > Mike Geary > Memphis > > ----- Original Message ----- > *From:* Julie Krueger <juliereneb@xxxxxxxxx> > *To:* lit-ideas@xxxxxxxxxxxxx > *Sent:* Friday, November 28, 2008 4:24 PM > *Subject:* [lit-ideas] The History of Effects > > From today's "Writer's Almanac": > The History of Effects > > by William > Greenway<http://www.elabs7.com/c.html?rtr=on&s=fj6,ctw4,dv,3v6l,g7eq,m9hw,l29c> > The Bible was created by Bishop Ussher > in 4004 B.C. Then Galileo cooked the universe > too long, and the earth, like a yolk, slipped off > center and everything began to wobble. > Freud needed a reason to talk about sex, > and Marx wrote a bestseller > so he could retire rich. > When the species started to hunt > for their origin, they discovered Darwin. > > So now the ears of corn put down > tethers to the earth, trees rake > the wind into piles, the sun turns the world > like a ballerina, the way a magnet whirls > a rotor. Silence squelches the radios, > and darkness the bulbs. Automobiles are invented > to reach the malls, and choppers to haul > body bags, and animals come to live with us > to quench our loneliness and nourish our hunger. > We've begun to love the people who need us > as dandruff rises from sweaters to infect our hair, > and parachutes are the white flags > of suicides that fail. > Julie Krueger > > >