[etni] composition worksheet for 12th grade
- From: "sarag" <saragabai@xxxxxxxxx>
- To: "ETNI" <etni@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- Date: Sun, 19 Mar 2006 20:27:44 +0200
I gave my 12th grade 5 point class the following
worksheet today. (why is this coming out underlined?)
Maybe someone will find it useful. (I think it's good
for 11th grade and also maybe 10th grade).
sara g in israel
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The following is an article for the high school
newspaper. Edit it and correct any mistakes you find.
The Traditional School Trip – Is it Still Relevant
Today?
Lot of parents and children feel that the traditional
school trip, where we sleep in a tent and go on hikes,
is outdated. I am a modern high school student. In
todays hi-tech era, me and my friends are not enjoy
these old fashioned trips. We are not interested in
trips that involving to climb a mountain in the heat
of the day.
Twenty years ago, everyone likes to sleep in a tent and
to eat burnt potatoes around a bonfire. Then was the
time of the pioneers, when all the youths was members
in youth movements. Today, our favorite pastime is
playing in the computer or chat on the internet.
The Ministry of Education think that a good trip must
to involve spending time in the outdoors. They didn't
consider the parents viewpoint. Knowing the present
security situation in our country, most parents very
worried when there children are not home, and they
don't know what happening to them.
In my opinion, the schools need to rethink about this
tradition. Let's go to clubs and dance. (2 mistakes)
NOTES –
1.. The above essay was written by a teacher to
demonstrate mistakes. The ideas expressed are not those
of the author.
2.. All of the mistakes were found in authentic
essays written by 12th grade students.
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