Hi Matthew. Here are some guidelines I use when writing for audiences that may have English as a second language: One idea, one sentence. Keep each sentence as short as possible. Don't shorten anything - so always use: do not, must not, can not, etc. Oh, plurals can also be an issue too. Verdana is a nice font to use and 10 point will be okay... Red logo's. That makes it hard. Paragraphs for online help I generally don't allow to become large, and again, I try and separate particular subjects into paragraphs. wjlewington@xxxxxxxxxx WJL Consulting. PO Box 404, Liverpool, NSW Australia, 1871 www.wjl.com.au Phone/facsimile: +61 2 9876 5345 Mobile/cell phone: +61 0408 612 752 -----Original Message----- From: austechwriter-bounce@xxxxxxxxxxxxx [mailto:austechwriter-bounce@xxxxxxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Matthew da Silva Sent: Thursday, 30 August 2007 12:49 To: austechwriter@xxxxxxxxxxxxx Subject: atw: Re: Web Text Line Length and Par Length I guess this is possible but most users are students, so it's probably not a big issue. A few of them may have bad eyes. We do get a lot of international students, though. In functionality terms, this is enabled. Matthew da Silva Technical Writer Communications and Training Team Application Services Group Information and Communications Technology Room 348, Services Building G12, 353 Abercrombie Street, The University of Sydney, NSW, 2006 Tel: +61 2 9036 9091 Mob: 0434 536 772 -----Original Message----- From: austechwriter-bounce@xxxxxxxxxxxxx [mailto:austechwriter-bounce@xxxxxxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Michael Lewis Sent: Thursday, 30 August 2007 12:29 PM To: austechwriter@xxxxxxxxxxxxx Subject: atw: Re: Web Text Line Length and Par Length Matthew, You haven't told us what tools you are using. How are you planning to prevent the user from changing the displayed size of the type, and is the "corporate red" heading colour going to come out right on all screens? All the online delivery methods I'm familiar with give the viewer the ability to change those, not to mention the window size. Michael Lewis ------------------------ Department of Linguistics Macquarie University Tel (02) 9850 7856 mailto:michael.lewis@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx ------------------------ >>> "Matthew da Silva" <mdasilva@xxxxxxxxxxx> 2007-08-30 08:11:30 >>> Hi all, I'm interested in knowing what you think optimal for online text presentation: * Length of line * Max tolerable number of words per sentence * Max tolerable number of lines in a paragraph E.g. * Is a typical 'blog line' the best or can we tolerate the line length used by the SMH? * Is 17 to 24 words the best number per sentence? * Do you think (as I do) that more than four lines in a paragraph are too much? Non-negotiable: * Font is Verdana and size is 10 point * Font colour is black * Heading colour is the corporate red Please send me your thoughts! Matthew da Silva Technical Writer Communications and Training Team Application Services Group Information and Communications Technology Room 348, Services Building G12, 353 Abercrombie Street, The University of Sydney, NSW, 2006 Tel: +61 2 9036 9091 Mob: 0434 536 772 ************************************************** To post a message to austechwriter, send the message to austechwriter@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx To subscribe to austechwriter, send a message to austechwriter-request@xxxxxxxxxxxxx with "subscribe" in the Subject field. To unsubscribe, send a message to austechwriter-request@xxxxxxxxxxxxx with "unsubscribe" in the Subject field. To search the austechwriter archives, go to www.freelists.org/archives/austechwriter To contact the list administrator, send a message to austechwriter-admins@xxxxxxxxxxxxx ************************************************** ************************************************** To post a message to austechwriter, send the message to austechwriter@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx To subscribe to austechwriter, send a message to austechwriter-request@xxxxxxxxxxxxx with "subscribe" in the Subject field. To unsubscribe, send a message to austechwriter-request@xxxxxxxxxxxxx with "unsubscribe" in the Subject field. To search the austechwriter archives, go to www.freelists.org/archives/austechwriter To contact the list administrator, send a message to austechwriter-admins@xxxxxxxxxxxxx ************************************************** ************************************************** To post a message to austechwriter, send the message to austechwriter@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx To subscribe to austechwriter, send a message to austechwriter-request@xxxxxxxxxxxxx with "subscribe" in the Subject field. To unsubscribe, send a message to austechwriter-request@xxxxxxxxxxxxx with "unsubscribe" in the Subject field. To search the austechwriter archives, go to www.freelists.org/archives/austechwriter To contact the list administrator, send a message to austechwriter-admins@xxxxxxxxxxxxx **************************************************