I have a few recommendations which I've incorporated into the attached
1. Decreased the font size of the name slightly to make it fit on one
2. Moved the mission statement up to just under the name, colored it
dark red, and added more whitespace around it, to draw attention to it.
3. Labeled the website and email links, and added a Facebook link; made
them all blue and underlined because they are links. Justified them left
rather then centered because I thought it just looked better.
4. Made the meeting text more concise, and added the street address.
5. Added "Please Join Us!" at the end.
Question about the mission statement: Does saying we want improved safety
for "motorists, bicyclists, and pedestrians" imply that our priorities are
in that order, even though we don't mean it to? If people might take it
that way regardless, do we want to reorder them to list the vulnerable
users first, such as "pedestrians, bicyclists, and motorists"? (Frankly, I
do actually care about the safety of pedestrians and bicyclists more,
precisely because they are more vulnerable, and their safety is often
considered less than that of motorists already.) Or is listing "motorists"
first an intentional strategy to assure them that we care about them too?
I made this a PDF so that it should render identically on everyone's
computer. Kim, I can send you the original Word document if you like.
On Fri, Jul 20, 2018 at 8:26 AM Lee Prince <leeleeprince51@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
*Westbrook Safe Mobility and Access Committee*
*Meetings are the third Wednesday of the month at the*
*Westbrook-Warren Congregational Church from 5:30 pm to 7:00 pm.*
*Our mission is to improve safety for motorists, bicyclists, and
pedestrians through education and advocating for change.*
On Fri, Jul 20, 2018 at 8:26 AM Lee Prince <leeleeprince51@xxxxxxxxx>
I'll copy it and paste it to this letter.
On Fri, Jul 20, 2018 at 8:23 AM KRISTI DUPERE <kristidupere3@xxxxxxxxx>
I open it up. And.did not sée the flyer draft.
On Fri, Jul 20, 2018, 8:17 AM Lee Prince <leeleeprince51@xxxxxxxxx>
No changes, it looks awesome! Thank you again ;)
On Fri, Jul 20, 2018 at 12:55 AM Kimberly Tarbox <
LeeLee, the first is our website address. This gives the individual
the ability to learn more about WSMAC, get added to the email list etc.
email address gives the individual a means of contacting us. Your opinions
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On Jul 19, 2018, at 11:49 AM, Lee Prince <leeleeprince51@xxxxxxxxx>
AWESOME JOB! One quick thing: I'd have either one or the other email
address, not both. Just my opinion.
On Thu, Jul 19, 2018 at 11:45 AM Mr. and Mrs. Michael Tarbox <
Attached you will find a copy of the WSMAC flyer draft.
Westbrook Safe Mobility and Access Committee, Member and Puppeteer
Tarbox Media Productions, Owner
I can be reached from 9am to 5pm EST Monday through Friday
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