Hi Eric! Great job... Here are a couple of things I found. The Hunger Site doesn't work.. could be they are just down. Also, you have most of your other (outside) ads (on your main page and all on your affiliate page) opening a new page, but the Hunger site and the Children's site does not. I think maybe you could have them open in new sites too... that way you keep the person at your page after they look at your *outside* links. The Starting Point link doesn't work either.. I get a DNS error on it. On the affiliate page, check your banner links, it's either the net is really busy, my machine, or the banners themselves, but I can't get any to open right now.. just get the same DNS error. Which makes me think that could just be my server and not a problem with your page, but you might want to check it out, to be sure that you have everything typed in correctly so you don't lose out on votes, etc. And I don't think the Crucial.com ad is intrusive in the least. As a matter of fact, it fits quite well on your page and in the theme of it. All in all... I really think the site looks terrific!! It's clean, easy to read and navigate. I would def. give you a couple of thumbs up!!! Great job! Tee ============== Tina Chapman Owner/Designer DesignWorks Web Design and Hosting http://www.dsgnworks.com We Believe In Design That Works! Voice Mail: 270-748-1675 E-mail: sales@xxxxxxxxxxxxx ----- Original Message ----- From: "Eric C. Vogel" <EricCVogel@xxxxxxxxxxxx> To: <websitecritique@xxxxxxxxxxxxx> Sent: Friday, August 03, 2001 8:29 AM Subject: [website-critique] computertalkshop.com I have changed the home page around. I dropped the web rings, moved the pass-it-on link to the sidebar and added a Crucal.com ad. Do you think the ad is intrusive? I am tring to find ways of getting donations. I will be adding a Amazon or PayPal donation box. I just have to figure out the service that takes the least. I have found PayPal to be the one with the prefered, but I do not qualify for that since I didn't transfer an account there. So I have to re-evaluate the two. Please give me feedback on this. www.computertalkshop.com Thank you, Eric Vogel Please Forward This Email to a Friend ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ List Info: //www.freelists.org/cgi-bin/webpage?webpage_id=websitecritique ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Please Forward This Email to a Friend ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ List Info: //www.freelists.org/cgi-bin/webpage?webpage_id=websitecritique ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~