[TechAssist] Re: Fw: my website-please comment
- From: "Al L" <alleathe@xxxxxxxxxxx>
- To: <techassist@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- Date: Mon, 23 Jan 2006 10:12:09 -0500
More good advice,should be super, after I include all this stuff. Thanks.
Al Leatherman
Al's TV
224 US Highway 46
Mine Hill, NJ 07803
973-361-5796
973-476-0854 (cell)
WWW.ALS-TV.NET
----- Original Message -----
From: "Larry E" <videotech@xxxxxxxxxxxx>
To: <techassist@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
Sent: Saturday, January 21, 2006 6:48 PM
Subject: [TechAssist] Re: Fw: my website-please comment
> Al, Heres my 2 cents worth of criticism,
> 1. wheres your store address? Your forcing the customer to call you just
> to
> find out where your shop is, while
> your explaining your directions you could be working on a set actually
> making money, and another potential
> customer is getting a busy signal.
> 2. get rid of the real estate (or put it on a link at the bottom)
> 3. " Serving you since 1969" or "37 years experience" sounds way better
> to
> me.
> 4. I would move the credit card logos up towards the top not at the bottom
> 5. You have 9 items in a list under the heading "Al`s tv offers" why not
> move the first 5 items to the left and the last 4
> to the right of the first 5 so they don`t have to scroll down so far? This
> would also make room for more info you might think of later. Hope you
> don`t
> take offense, just suggestions, Hope you do well with it, Larry E
>
> Larry Eastman
> American TV & Electronics
> Crystal River, Fl. 34428
> ----- Original Message -----
> From: "Al L" <alleathe@xxxxxxxxxxx>
> To: <techassist@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
> Sent: Saturday, January 21, 2006 10:28 AM
> Subject: [TechAssist] Fw: my website-please comment
>
>
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>>
>>
>> > Please comment, good or bad, I can take it! TIA
>> >
>> > Al Leatherman
>> > Al's TV
>> > 224 US Highway 46
>> > Mine Hill, NJ 07803
>> > 973-361-5796
>> > 973-476-0854 (cell)
>> > WWW.ALS-TV.NET
>>
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