Al, Heres my 2 cents worth of criticism, 1. wheres your store address? Your forcing the customer to call you just to find out where your shop is, while your explaining your directions you could be working on a set actually making money, and another potential customer is getting a busy signal. 2. get rid of the real estate (or put it on a link at the bottom) 3. " Serving you since 1969" or "37 years experience" sounds way better to me. 4. I would move the credit card logos up towards the top not at the bottom 5. You have 9 items in a list under the heading "Al`s tv offers" why not move the first 5 items to the left and the last 4 to the right of the first 5 so they don`t have to scroll down so far? This would also make room for more info you might think of later. Hope you don`t take offense, just suggestions, Hope you do well with it, Larry E Larry Eastman American TV & Electronics Crystal River, Fl. 34428 ----- Original Message ----- From: "Al L" <alleathe@xxxxxxxxxxx> To: <techassist@xxxxxxxxxxxxx> Sent: Saturday, January 21, 2006 10:28 AM Subject: [TechAssist] Fw: my website-please comment > > > > > Please comment, good or bad, I can take it! TIA > > > > Al Leatherman > > Al's TV > > 224 US Highway 46 > > Mine Hill, NJ 07803 > > 973-361-5796 > > 973-476-0854 (cell) > > WWW.ALS-TV.NET > > -------------------------------------------------------------------------- --- > This Email List is accessible to the general public through search engines. Remove: http://www.tech-assist.org/remove.htm > Set Vacation mailto:ecartis@xxxxxxxxxxxxx?subject=set%20techassist%20vacation > Lost Password: http://www.tech-assist.org and select "Login Problems?". > Email Archives: //www.freelists.org/archives/techassist/ > > > > -- > No virus found in this incoming message. > Checked by AVG Free Edition. > Version: 7.1.375 / Virus Database: 267.14.21/235 - Release Date: 1/19/2006 > > ----------------------------------------------------------------------------- This Email List is accessible to the general public through search engines. Remove: http://www.tech-assist.org/remove.htm Set Vacation mailto:ecartis@xxxxxxxxxxxxx?subject=set%20techassist%20vacation Lost Password: http://www.tech-assist.org and select "Login Problems?". Email Archives: //www.freelists.org/archives/techassist/