[SKRIVA] Felen med filmmanus
- From: Ahrvid <ahrvid@xxxxxxxxxxx>
- To: "skriva@xxxxxxxxxxxxx" <skriva@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- Date: Thu, 6 Feb 2014 00:12:07 +0100
En genomgång av hollywoodska filmmanus, med statisik om dem, inkl vad granskare
ansett det varit för fel med dem:
http://www.fastcocreate.com/3022129/all-the-things-that-are-wrong-with-your-screenplay-in-one-handy-infographic?partner=newsletter#2
De 20 första manusfelen:
01The story begins too late in the script
02
The scenes are void of meaningful conflict
03
The script has a by-the-numbers execution
04
The story is too thin
05
The villains are cartoonish, evil-for-the-sake-of-evil
06
The character logic is muddy
07
The female part is underwritten
08
The narrative falls into a repetitive pattern
09
The conflict is inconsequential, flash-in-the-pan
10
The protagonist is a standard issue hero
11
The script favors style over substance
12
The ending is completely anti-climactic
13
The characters are all stereotypes
14
The script suffers from arbitrary complexity
15
The script goes off the rails in the third act
16
The script’s questions are left unanswered
17
The story is a string of unrelated vignettes
18
The plot unravels through convenience/contrivance
19
The script is tonally confused
20
The protagonist is not as strong as need be
De där felen är nog värda att undvika även när man skriver noveller!
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