[projectaon] Re: Outstanding Errata Sprint (Week 6)
- From: Benjamin I Krefetz <krefetz@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- To: Project Aon <projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- Date: Sat, 4 Jun 2011 18:52:10 -0400 (EDT)
On Sat, 4 Jun 2011, Simon Osborne wrote:
(er) 260: Giak crew allocate cabins -> The Giak crew allocates cabins
[LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007]
<http://www.projectaon.org/test/en/xhtml/lw/12tmod/sect260.htm>
Perhaps "Giak crew members allocate cabins"? Adding "the" would change the
sentence to imply that the entire crew is Giak.
Ben
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