There are no *official* rules of English grammar whatsoever /grins/ there is only common practice and precedent. Using "their" here is a fairly commonplace phrasing.One way to rationalise it is that imagine the sentence with a person's name instead: you would write ".but you sense that John is trapped within. You can almost hear their desperate cries for release."
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To: <projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx> Cc: <ch.honza@xxxxxxxxxx> Sent: Thursday, January 28, 2010 5:51 PM Subject: [projectaon] Re: Editor's Companion Submission
On Thu, 28 Jan 2010, pamail.cgi@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx wrote:The following was sent from the Editor's Companion form From: Jan Charv?t <ch.honza@xxxxxxxxxx> Date: 13:08:14 on Thursday, January 28, 2010 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ (er) 03tcok 244: their desperate cries -> its desperate cries ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Oooh. This is an interesting one. The antecedent is "someone or something". If "someone" is the more important part of the antecedent, it should be left as-is, but if "something" is the more important part, it should be changed to "its".My gut instinct is to make agreement with "someone" and leave as-is, but only because "someone" comes first. Is there an official rule of English grammar on this?Ben ~~~~~~ Manage your subscription at //www.freelists.org/list/projectaon
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