[projectaon] Re: Editor's Companion Submission

  • From: Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx>
  • To: projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
  • Date: Wed, 27 Jan 2010 09:30:08 +0000

On 26/01/2010 19:07, Timothy Pederick wrote:
I also found these along the way:

(er) 16tlov 105: you choose not to dwell here -> you choose not to delay
here [tp: Or "tarry" or "stop" or any of numerous other synonyms;
anything but "dwell", which (notwithstanding the phrase "dwell on/upon")
I've never seen used to mean "stay for a little while", rather than
"take up residence"]
(er) 16tlov 105: give rise for concern -> give cause for concern [tp: Or
perhaps "give rise to concern"]

Both fixed last night, though I couldn't upload them until this morning.

As for the confusion over the sentence in Book 17...put it down to a lack of sleep on my part, LeRoy. ;-)

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Simon Osborne
Project Aon

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