[projectaon] Re: Comment period for 1-7
- From: Jonathan Blake <jonathan@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- To: Project Aon List <projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- Date: Thu, 16 Feb 2012 20:29:39 -0800
On Thu, Feb 16, 2012 at 8:02 PM, Jonathan Blake <jonathan@xxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> On Thu, Feb 16, 2012 at 4:50 PM, Jonathan Blake <jonathan@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
> wrote:
>
>> With that ready, I propose we start the comment period immediately and
>> finish at the end of the 24th. Please play through them, look at the
>> diffs, whatever you think is necessary to vet them before we republish
>> them sometime after the 24th. Report back anything that you think is
>> amiss.
>
> I just reviewed the diff for Flight from the Dark, and all of the
> changes made look good to me.
Reviewing Fire on the Water:
78: Did we intend to remove the sentence "In the grey light of the
storm, you watch as the broken ship sinks beneath the heaving sea."?
It took much longer to review than Flight from the Dark. I think it's
only going to get longer. :)
--
Jon
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