[projectaon] Re: Comment period for 1-7
- From: Jonathan Blake <jonathan@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- To: projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
- Date: Fri, 24 Feb 2012 13:22:28 -0800
On Fri, Feb 24, 2012 at 6:07 AM, Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> I've committed some changes to ensure that the xml files pass Checkerrata.pl
> and to delete a few rogue double-spaces (not just in Books 1-7). Only thing
> I think you might want to re-look at is Option 3 of Section 260 in Book 6.
>
> It was: "If you decide to ignore them, take a seat elsewhere, and order some
> food, turn to 172."
>
> It's now: "If you decide to ignore them, take a seat elsewhere and order
> some food, turn to 172."
>
> I think the original is better in using a serial comma. Alternatively, if we
> keep the revision, it would be better to put a period after "food" and
> Capitalise "Turn"--remembering to insert the requisite <!--link-text--> tag
> in the Errata entry. ;-)
I see your point. I think the most correct way to handle this may be
to use a semicolon, but that feels way to formal for a _game_ book, so
I've reverted that change.
--
Jon
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