[projectaon] Re: Comment period for 1-7
- From: Jonathan Blake <jonathan@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- To: projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
- Date: Wed, 22 Feb 2012 14:57:29 -0800
On Wed, Feb 22, 2012 at 2:42 PM, Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> Looked at the changes to Book 2. As a minor suggested alteration, how about
> change the choice in Section 160 to read:
>
> If you are carrying a Weapon and wish to demonstrate your Kai Weaponskill...
>
> I think it sounds a little bit better, perhaps, maybe, but only a little...
Done. :)
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Jon
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