On Tue, 22 Nov 2011, Simon Osborne wrote:
On 21/11/2011 23:27, Jonathan Blake wrote:[27] (Section 323) Added "This bonus is applicable only when the missiles are aimed at you and not when you are aiming them at an object or enemy."How about this? "It adds +1 to your score should you be instructed to pick a number from the Random Number Table when trying to avoid normal missiles (e.g. arrows, bolts, darts, etc.) aimed at you."Yeah, I like your wording. Clarity is the main goal when incorporating footnote materials into the main text.
Just to nitpick before the change gets committed, "e.g." and "etc." are redundant against each other. "E.g." already indicates that the listing is partial, so there's no need to indicate it again with etc. :)
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