2011/4/27 Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx>: > As the resident Grey Star expert, could you give a bit of feedback on a few > things, please, Thomas? ;-) > > #1: Grey Star the Wizard > (ne) 264: [so: Can we improve this puzzle for partially-sighted > readers?] > > <http://www.projectaon.org/test/en/xhtml-simple/gs/01gstw.htm#sect264> Hm, well, something like "The amulet is round. From top to bottom it has got two horizontal lines followed by a circle inscribed on it." > #2: Grey Star the Wizard > (er) 149: See > <http://projectaon.proboards.com/index.cgi?action=gotopost&board=general&thread=1999&post=34881> > > <http://www.projectaon.org/test/en/xhtml/gs/01gstw/sect149.htm> I guess I just don't agree with luposolitario's take on it - why "You must fight the Kleasá to the death." if it's not a normal fight? > #3: War of the Wizards > (ft) 154, 205: LM: Do we need to put the footnote about negative > willpower etc. here? it follows a combat in ref236. although unlikely, it > is possible to use up all the willpower in that battle] > > <http://www.projectaon.org/test/en/xhtml/gs/04wotw/sect154.htm> > <http://www.projectaon.org/test/en/xhtml/gs/04wotw/sect205.htm> Using up all your 50+ WP in 236 is beyond unlikely, so I don't think we need to add this. There several other places in the books here you are told to use WP though you can _theoretically_ have spent all of them in a previous combat - like in the beginning of 01gstw. Shall we really footnote all of these? > #4: War of the Wizards > > (ft) 189, 219: [LM: Do we need to put the footnote about negative > willpower etc. here? it follows a combat in ref166. although unlikely, it > is possible to use up all the willpower in that battle] > > <http://www.projectaon.org/test/en/xhtml/gs/04wotw/sect189.htm> > <http://www.projectaon.org/test/en/xhtml/gs/04wotw/sect219.htm> Same thing here. > I count a list of 53 outstanding issues with the GS books. At some point we > should revise the Grey Star series, though let's give priority to Lone Wolf > for now. I theory, I should have spare time to spend on such a thing... -- Thomas ~~~~~~ Manage your subscription at //www.freelists.org/list/projectaon