To clarify, Kudos go to Alissa, not me. I merely converted it to a pdf for all the non-Mac people. Linda > On Oct 17, 2014, at 11:10 AM, Henry Warren <hewarren3@xxxxxxxxxxx> wrote: > > I see nothing wrong with snooty if you are trying to attract new folks. > > I do suggest two other things for consideration while also applauding Linda's > work. > > 1. The statement that we need 25 members to pay our bills sounds a little > desperate and money focused. > > 2. The last paragraph has too much information for a recruiting tool. These > are issues that can be brought up in discussion with interested parties. In > particular, I would not appear to limit additional funds over the basic > membership to subsidy of other members. We discussed this at the last meeting > as I recall. You could just say that additional contributions are welcome (or > encouraged) for those who are able to help with other expenses in the future. > Or something like that. > > Henry > > > > Henry Warren > 207-653-1198 > >> On Oct 16, 2014, at 3:42 PM, Deirdre McClure <dmcclure@xxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote: >> >> Would Dr. deirdre McClure look better, or would it be too snooty? >> >>> On Oct 16, 2014, at 3:08 PM, "Linda Atherton" <linda5a@xxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote: >>> >>> Here's the promo file in pdf format. >>> >>> Linda >>> <10.14.14 PC promo.pages.pdf> >