[phoenixchorale] Re: Phoenix Promo

  • From: Linda Atherton <linda5a@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
  • To: "phoenixchorale@xxxxxxxxxxxxx" <phoenixchorale@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
  • Date: Fri, 17 Oct 2014 12:33:55 -0400

To clarify, Kudos go to Alissa, not me. I merely converted it to a pdf for all 
the non-Mac people.

Linda

> On Oct 17, 2014, at 11:10 AM, Henry Warren <hewarren3@xxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> 
> I see nothing wrong with snooty if you are trying to attract new folks. 
> 
> I do suggest two other things for consideration while also applauding Linda's 
> work. 
> 
> 1.  The statement that we need 25 members to pay our bills sounds a little 
> desperate and money focused. 
> 
> 2.  The last paragraph has too much information for a recruiting tool. These 
> are issues that can be brought up in discussion with interested parties. In 
> particular, I would not appear to limit additional funds over the basic 
> membership to subsidy of other members. We discussed this at the last meeting 
> as I recall. You could just say that additional contributions are welcome (or 
> encouraged) for those who are able to help with other expenses in the future. 
> Or something like that. 
> 
> Henry
> 
> 
> 
> Henry Warren
> 207-653-1198
> 
>> On Oct 16, 2014, at 3:42 PM, Deirdre McClure <dmcclure@xxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
>> 
>> Would Dr. deirdre McClure look better, or would it be too snooty?
>> 
>>> On Oct 16, 2014, at 3:08 PM, "Linda Atherton" <linda5a@xxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
>>> 
>>> Here's the promo file in pdf format.
>>> 
>>> Linda
>>> <10.14.14 PC promo.pages.pdf>
> 

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