Very valid point, Don! Tim On Feb 14, 2012, at 4:19 PM, Don Boyd wrote: > In would make one change. In the last paragraph I would change "charity" to > "Generosity", otherwise I like that very much. > > Don > > On 2/14/2012 4:09 PM, Tim Jones wrote: >> How's this: >> >> -=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=- >> >> The Phoenix Astronomical Society members take great pride in our ability to >> perform public star parties and astronomical outreach programs in >> association with Paradise Value Community College's Physics and Astronomy >> programs and students. There are a few considerations that must be taken >> into account when performing these events. Because we are working to >> provide education and entertainment to attendees that are usually new to >> astronomy, such events must be held at a location that is easily traveled >> to, safe, comfortable, and near facilities for the public. Additionally, >> environments that are sensitive to the darkness requirements of sharing the >> night skies and a secure area for exhibiting our telescopes and collection >> is important to us as presenting amateur astronomers. >> >> Through the charity of Paradise Value Community College towards the members >> of PAS, the PVCC Black Mountain campus with the new telescope pad offers >> just such a location for these types of events. >> >> Tim >> >> > >