From: lit-ideas-bounce@xxxxxxxxxxxxx [mailto:lit-ideas-bounce@xxxxxxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of John Wager Sent: 22 December 2012 07:12 AM To: lit-ideas@xxxxxxxxxxxxx Subject: [lit-ideas] Re: why can't the english (professors) learn how to speak? Donal McEvoy wrote: Of course, the question is itself badly phrased: they have learnt how to speak. What the "quote" shows is not an inability to speak but some alleged defect in their writing. So the question would be clearer if phrased as 'Why can't English professors write better English (than what they sometimes do)?" Not being an English professor, I not only bow to Lacan who bows to Freud who bows to the Greeks, but bow out here. Donal There may be some very obvious reasons why philosophers write so poorly. 1. When writing a paper for a seminar or course, even if that paper is to be read to the class for discussion, the "audience" for the paper is generally understood to be the professor. As long as it has the required technical vocabulary set by the professor, it will be admitted as a possibly serious paper. If the writer shows little appreciation of the technical vocabulary of the professor's (often small) world, it's already got a strike against it before the professor even considers the content and argument. 2. What goes for papers in a seminar goes even triple in a dissertation. The audience for that is even more limited; my own panel of 3 readers was harmed by the fact that my advisor knew everything about the topic, but the other two readers agreed to serve because, well, I needed two other readers and they liked me well enough. So I was really writing for only my advisor, and what I said often determined how strongly he would advertise me as a good job candidate to others. This is not a good time to try to make vocabulary and technical language simpler; it's a good time to show mastery over a convoluted and complex way of writing that speaks only to the initiate. 3. The lack of interest in giving much weight to teaching in job evaluation means students are largely left out of consideration in how the new Ph.D. communicates to a general public. All the new Ph.D.'s writing is still addressed to the few initiates who will get a paper published in a narrow area perhaps devoid of any student interest at all. Having said all of that, I must say I'm impressed by quite a few British books being written for a general public in which fairly dry subjects are written about in intelligent and engaging ways. But these seem to all be written by slightly more senior faculty, whose reputations with jargon is already well-established. Heaven forbid someone attempt a popular book before one's reputation is made in "serious" journals or books. In my own case, what drew me to my advisor for the dissertation was partly the "style" of his own writing; it was elegant and effective. He actually despised the "jargonistic" approach to philosophy, so much so that he had stopped attending APA meetings, which also meant he was of very little use to me in making connections for my first job. Ah, well. ======= Please find our Email Disclaimer here-->: http://www.ukzn.ac.za/disclaimer =======