[lit-ideas] Re: Wednesday Poem
- From: Eric Yost <eyost1132@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- To: lit-ideas@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
- Date: Thu, 15 Jun 2006 12:10:07 -0400
David: I think I might cut the last line.
It's a very witty poem, David. Be a shame to cut that last line:
why'd they give up rhymes
Maybe you could add something instead? Like, for example
(but not as a real suggestion):
why'd they give up rhymes
--and caesuras--to lick my feet
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