[lit-ideas] Re: Wednesday Poem

  • From: Eric Yost <eyost1132@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
  • To: lit-ideas@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
  • Date: Thu, 15 Jun 2006 12:10:07 -0400

David: I think I might cut the last line.

It's a very witty poem, David. Be a shame to cut that last line:

why'd they give up rhymes

Maybe you could add something instead? Like, for example (but not as a real suggestion):

why'd they give up rhymes
--and caesuras--to lick my feet

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