[lit-ideas] Re: Wednesday Poem

  • From: "John McCreery" <john.mccreery@xxxxxxxxx>
  • To: lit-ideas@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
  • Date: Thu, 15 Jun 2006 11:41:06 +0900

On 6/15/06, David Ritchie <ritchierd@xxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:


On Jun 14, 2006, at 7:05 PM, John McCreery wrote:

> words biting like fleas and truths whining like cats--bloody marvelous!
>
> John
>

I think I might cut the last line.


Good idea. It distracts from the image.

John
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