In a message dated 6/23/2009 2:14:46 P.M. Eastern Daylight Time, wokshevs@xxxxxx writes: 1) This sentence is unintelligible due to sentence structure. "J. M. Geary, of Memphis, of Kant, of Grice, was and no was in Memphis student studied." 2) You do not articulate the meaning of this concept and yet it figures centrally in your argument. "Sex and gender do not genderise _sexism_; sexism genderises itself." 3) This paragraph has no relation to the previous paragraph. Moreover, I do not see how it contributes to any of the issues you address in this paper. Chomsky was influential to him in Memphis. Grice was influential to him in Memphis. 4) This sentence appears to contradict what you say on p.7. Am I misreading you here? His Catholicism is protestant (p. 7) His Protestantism is Catholic. 5) You need to document your interpretation of Kant's view here. I doubt that Kant ever held such a view. Geary's Kant wrote only _one_ critique: for the two unfold nicely into one: the moral noumenon is not a phainomenon. 6) Much of this paper is simply descriptive. It does not develop a clear argument on the topic it claims to address. Biographical data on the writers you cite show no necessary relevance to their arguments or to your critical analyses of those arguments and should be deleted in the interest of space. Geary's mother was also from the South. Her family was English in part. Geary's mother met Geary's father at a party. This party it is interest to expand on. It took place not far from the Congregational Church, where Geary's great aunt ... 7) There is no need to include in your Bibliography texts that are not cited or addressed in your paper. Geary, Conversations with Geary. Geary, Unpublished Seminars Geary, The Complete Telephone Conversations. Cheers, J. L. S. **************Make your summer sizzle with fast and easy recipes for the grill. (http://food.aol.com/grilling?ncid=emlcntusfood00000004) ------------------------------------------------------------------ To change your Lit-Ideas settings (subscribe/unsub, vacation on/off, digest on/off), visit www.andreas.com/faq-lit-ideas.html