[lit-ideas] Bra Straps

  • From: Eric <eyost1132@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
  • To: lit-ideas@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
  • Date: Wed, 15 Mar 2006 12:55:12 -0500

>>Bra Straps

Hey that's quite good, Simon! You should expand that. It's begging to get worked into a short story or novel chapter. You give a clear image but no idea where it is going...a great hook...until the last sentence, when you say it is going to be postponed. Please do something with that. It's too good to abandon.

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