[lit-ideas] Re: Another Sunday Poem

  • From: "Lawrence Helm" <lawrencehelm@xxxxxxxxxxxx>
  • To: <lit-ideas@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
  • Date: Sun, 29 Jan 2006 10:50:31 -0800

Yes, it's rather precipitous to judge a poet from a single poem; although
I've posted others in the past  . . . but in explanation,

 

            

 

            PIVOTAL PERSPECTIVES

 

            I drove in my last piton,

            Hanging down six hundred

            Feet above the canyon floor

            (Falling would take a long time).

            My sweaty fingers shook

            As I strung my line anew

            And swung to the new location.

            

            At some point words will

            Fail and I'll fall flailing

            And protesting down

            Toward the long standing

            Rubble with consternation,

            But for now I retrieve

            The previous and

 

            Set it firmly on the

            Edge, screwing it in

            And seeing the way

            Up even if I have

            To merely climb the rest

            Instead of setting one

            More piton half way

 

            Beyond what I will need,

            Freeing my mind to

            Contemplate the edge

            From a new perspective

            As though I had arrived

            At new understanding rather

            Than a place I must climb down from.

 

 

 

Lawrence

 

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From: lit-ideas-bounce@xxxxxxxxxxxxx [mailto:lit-ideas-bounce@xxxxxxxxxxxxx]
On Behalf Of Mike Geary
Sent: Sunday, January 29, 2006 10:31 AM
To: lit-ideas@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
Subject: [lit-ideas] Re: Another Sunday Poem

 

Wow, Lawrence.  JK misreads you.  Someone wrote me offlist to ask when you
had become human  :  )  a little liberal humor there.   Nice poem.  Reminds
me of the Amadou Diallo shoot down.  Nicely handled.

 

Mike Geary

 

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