--- On Mon, 6/6/11, Jlsperanza@xxxxxxx <Jlsperanza@xxxxxxx> wrote: Thanks for the interesting historical comments. > Today, poetry is classified, by McEvoy into two main > groups: > > --- good > > and > > bad. Perhaps "evaluated as either good or bad"" is better than "classified into", but - that aside - surely, yes, the worth, merit etc. of the writing is the key question? I am very interested in hearing an appreciation of the poetry I have quoted; but a kind of academic defence that explains its worth in the minutiae of some modern poetic aesthetic, no matter how 'learned', will not prove its worth but may in fact only prove the limitations of that 'aesthetic' and the tunnel vision of those pursuing their 'art' in those terms: of course, the apparent crassness and self-indulgence of language like "She is the empress of ice cream" or "the Bishop of Uppsala...up there" _might_ be relieved by its context, but (to me) here it is not. The 'Bad Poetry Competition' has a serious point, as an experiment, akin to the point that might be made where we had purported 'art' by an artist than could not be easily differentiated from the paint splashes of an animal or the gathering and arrangement of detritus by the typical adolescent [Emin]. Something is wrong if we cannot spot the difference: for example, between a Dylan lyric and a sub-Dylan copy. My point is that while it might be possible to write a piece of poetry that might be hard to tell apart from some lesser known excerpt by a great poet like, say, Eliot, it would not be as easy to do as it would be in the case of the examples given - and that is because we would have to produce something of quality. If Eliot had produced "Look" I would not catch my breath at some great new poetic development by him but assume he had lost his poetic marbles. See. A while back no one (particularly Eric) took the bait on whether Dylan's lyrics count as poetry or not - perhaps rightly suspecting that any discussion would hinge on definitions of poetry, and that might not prove worthwhile. Certainly Dylan's use of words in song are ingredients in song and the song is a template for a performance: and much of the nuance of those words does not arise from them as simple 'words-on-a-page' or even as 'spoken words' but in performance, particularly his recordings - Dylan's recordings are the exemplification of his art, and it is typical of this art that it combines seemingly opposite feelings and thoughts [in its recorded form on 'Freewheelin', for example, "Don't Think Twice" is at once full of acceptance and resignation and of anger, sarcasm and condemnation, but these varying shades of meaning and feeling are conveyed by much more than the words or even the ambivalent title]; consequently, Dylan's lyrics are not best approached as 'words-on-a-page' or even as 'spoken-word' poetry, even if they might pass muster when approached this way. Poetry or not, they are much more worthwhile as art than the crud presented as "poetry" in my recent posts, or some of the crud that passes for contemporary British art. Poetry such as that quoted shows that trying to defend Dylan as poetry may also be misplaced as it does not tell us anything as to its quality whether it is poetry or not. The quality of Dylan's lyrics as an example will, like any example, not be free from controversy of course but to me it is an 'objective' question that those lyrics have a much greater quality than comparable efforts of others; this is particularly evident when considering Dylan copyists - the Dylanisms of The Rolling Stones' "Jigsaw Puzzle" are almost laughably naff to the extent that Dylan of that period would never produce such a song even as a self-parodic joke, whereas a great popular song like "Whiter Shade Of Pale" is easily conceivable as a song from "The Basement Tapes", songs which are often full of wit but never naff. The abiding question, as with all works of art (and also scientific theories), is not so much 'Is it art (or science)?' but 'What is its worth?' It is part of developing our appreciation of art that we can and should form judgments on this, and we can and should try to explain, if possible, why we have arrived at those judgments: and we certainly should never be duped by the self-proclaimed artist into assuming their product is of any special worth because it has the stamp 'product of an artist'. If this should almost go without saying, then dividing into "good" or "bad" is not just McEvoy or "Today". Perhaps I should set out in detail why I think "Look" is an almost shockingly bad poem (except we're nearly all past shocking by now), both pretentious and facile - but I offered it without comment first: to ascertain whether any on the list see more quality in it than I, and so to check whether criticising it is not merely shooting fish in a barrel as far as others are concerned. Also, as said, I am very interested to have explained why it has a worth I have missed. I admit it starts interestingly enough and on a potentially interesting theme, but it goes nowhere very interesting and I suspect it actually misunderstands the role "looking" plays in the thought of those many figures mentioned. In fact, it is deeply patronising as only the half-informed can sometimes be -even from the start it tries to reduce the concept of a Fibonacci sequence to merely the upshot of some merchant's counting, which is very misplaced [like dismissing Darwinism as the product of a mere student of worms], and throughout it fails to do justice to those many thinkers who used the visible world to test theories about invisible worlds behind it or otherwise used invisible worlds to explain the visible. Instead it seems to imply these people were, unlike the poet presumably, myopically fixated on the visible, which is certainly not true of most of them. And then, from Fibonacci onto Mao, it lands up on some - hardly related and not "wise" but facile - observation of the existence of unhappiness. And happiness. See. See what? Donal ------------------------------------------------------------------ To change your Lit-Ideas settings (subscribe/unsub, vacation on/off, digest on/off), visit www.andreas.com/faq-lit-ideas.html