#4 is nominated for Womanizer's Magazine TIP of MONTH ;-) Thanks Uncle Ted :-) Amitiés Philippe, assitant photographer to the bachelors' association Le 8 juin 11 à 17:08, <tedgrant@xxxxxxx> <tedgrant@xxxxxxx> a écrit : > > Miha Golobic SHOWED: > Subject: [LRflex] Img > > >> Portrait of an acquaintance: >> http://gallery.leica-users.org/v/Miha/006-2.JPG.html >> Evening light after sunset. >> Thanks! >> Miha > > I have always said, "as long as the exposure maker is happy with the > perceived photo then that's all that matters!" He or she can stand > by their > convictions of liking it, even if the world thinks other wise. :-) > > However considering I've been dragged kicking and screaming into > this for an > opinion I shall offer a few small tips! :-) > > By now, after all these years, you'd think the old guy would know > better! > :-) Please don't hurt me as I'm an elder person and hurt easily. :-) > > I also realize and accept Miha may offer quite strongly I can jump > off a > cliff into the ocean! So be it. ;-) > > 1/ Attractive lady... (who might have beautiful eyes)..... if we > could only > see them????? I too think she might be checking toe nails in the > sandals? > :-) > > 2/ The pleasant "shy kind of smile" is lost because we see no eyes! > > 3/ The light is nice, soft, gentle quite subtle for an attractive > lady as we > see! But lost because she's looking at your toe nails and sandals! > > 3/ If she had her head up, not necessarily looking into camera... IE: > Indicating a type of posed rather than a nice "see it-shoot it > expression." > it would probably have captured more of the beauty of the young lady's > attractiveness. > > 4/ Main suggestion? I'd take her out for another coffee or drink to > the same > location under the similar lighting conditions snip? ;-) > and do a re-shoot while > having a friend along so the "model & friend" are in conversation. > Then > simply watch for a moment when she smiles nicely in an eye to eye > contact > with the other friend..... "WHILE SHE IS LISTENING TO THE FRIEND > SAYING > SOMETHING INTERESTING. A MOMENT WHEN YOUR MODEL IS LISTENING WITH > HER EYES, > BUT HEARING WITH HER EARS! A very important bit of watching and > photographing human beings....... "The eyes!" > > It's as simple as that. > > A third party carries the conversation, subject listens and photog > clicks > away as beautiful expressions appear during the conversation! But > rarely > shoot the model while he or she is speaking! WHY? Well you'll > probably catch > them just at the point with a screwed-up ugly mouth look! > > That's all folks. > > Quite honestly...... you blew this shot simply because we do not see > her > eyes in some fashion as you've only captured a small part of her > beauty with > this exposure. > > There you go, I knew you'd like a small critique! ;-) ;-) > > cheers, > old Doc. ted! :-) > > ------ > Unsubscribe or change to/from Digest Mode at: > http://www.lrflex.furnfeather.net/ > Archives are at: > //www.freelists.org/archives/leicareflex/ > NO ARCHIVE ------ Unsubscribe or change to/from Digest Mode at: http://www.lrflex.furnfeather.net/ Archives are at: //www.freelists.org/archives/leicareflex/