[ibis-macro] Comments on BIRD 107.1

  • From: "Muranyi, Arpad" <Arpad_Muranyi@xxxxxxxxxx>
  • To: "IBIS-ATM" <ibis-macro@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
  • Date: Thu, 10 Apr 2008 12:35:56 -0700

Hello everyone,
 
I read through the 107.1 draft, and found a couple of minor editorials.
Other than these, we can submit it as far as I am concerned.
 
 
 
1)  Grammar:  in the text of 2.1.6 we should change "pass" to "passes".
 
2)  Kumar suggested not to use the word "convolves".  Is this something
we would want to eliminate from "Step 4"?
 
3)  At the end, we should add that this was discussed on the 4/1 and 4/8
meetings:
 
The thoughts captured in this BIRD were discussed at the April 1, 2008
meeting of the 
IBIS-ATM Working Group.  A slide presentation of this material is
available at:
http://tinyurl.com/28ouvx
 
 
 
Thanks,
 
Arpad
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