[hipl-commit] [trunk] Rev 4518: doc: small grammar fixes

  • From: Diego Biurrun <diego@xxxxxxxxxx>
  • To: hipl-commit@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
  • Date: Sun, 16 May 2010 13:35:39 +0300

Committer: Diego Biurrun <diego@xxxxxxxxxx>
Date: 16/05/2010 at 13:35:39
Revision: 4518
Revision-id: diego@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Branch nick: trunk

Log:
  doc: small grammar fixes

Modified:
  M  doc/HOWTO.xml

=== modified file 'doc/HOWTO.xml'
--- doc/HOWTO.xml       2010-05-16 10:34:20 +0000
+++ doc/HOWTO.xml       2010-05-16 10:35:31 +0000
@@ -1638,8 +1638,8 @@
     </para>
     <para>
       This section show to developers and maintainers how to test your
-      HIPL installation. The section starts with a IPv6 test applications
-      applications, continues with IPv4-IPv6 interoperability and concludes
+      HIPL installation. The section starts with IPv6 test applications,
+      continues with IPv4-IPv6 interoperability and concludes
       with IPv4 test applications.
     </para>
     <section id="ipv6_appl">
@@ -1897,7 +1897,7 @@
     </para>
     <para>
       The handover code is based on RFC5206.
-      Not all of the features all yet implemented and the
+      Not all of the features are implemented yet and the
       code quality is still far from bullet proof.
     </para>
     <para>

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