[haiku] Re: Haiku Flyer for GSOC09

  • From: Humdinger <humdingerb@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
  • To: haiku@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
  • Date: Fri, 06 Mar 2009 15:32:14 +0100

Jorge G. Mare wrote:
Hopefully there are not many spelling mistakes or grammatical horrors, I
mean, errors. :)

Not an error, but I'd change the
"Our seasoned developers mentor you to success."
to
"Our experienced developers mentor you to success."

We'll have "seasoned" again in the "=-box".

Regards,
Humdinger

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