[haiku-doc] Re: suggested changes for _app_intro.dox
- From: TimH <timh@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- To: haiku-doc@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
- Date: Wed, 18 Feb 2009 16:36:58 -0800
Bob Colwell [bcolwell@xxxxxxxx] wrote:
> Hi, folks
>
> I have included a few suggestions to make this a little more readable,
> and to spiffy-up the grammar. Feel free to use as you think best. My
> suggestions are in red, with explanations where appropriate.
> Perhaps "The Application Kit should be your starting point, if you want
> to ...."
I like this wording, but I wasn't really comfortable deviating too
much from the original author's verbiage. Also, that might seem a little
too close to the BeBook version which says "The Application Kit is the
starting point for all applications." I'm not sure what the policy is on
how close we can be to the BeBook. I will defer to the document team...
> larger (there are only two groups: "largest" means three or more groups.
> group contains
Ah, yes. That was a really stupid mistake on my part. Can't
believe I missed that. I will fix with a new diff.
> Thanks, Tim; I liked your changes.
Thanks for the feedback. If I missed any, let me know. I think
you were using colors and I use a text-only email client with this account.
Well, with any of my accounts, really.
--TimH
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