[haiku-doc] Re: Instance of bad English?

  • From: Shane Moore <shane.moore.mailbox@xxxxxxxxx>
  • To: haiku-doc@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
  • Date: Sat, 30 Dec 2017 14:15:31 +1100

Hello,
   How about the following:
   "The Master Boot Record (MBR) is now saved (in case anything goes wrong,
or you want to return to not having a boot menu)."
It has placed the main point first, and the significance second. It avoids
the need to use the word 'again'.

Shane

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