Hey, All comments are appreciated, I'd have missed the 2 char indentation on authors if you hadn't mentioned it. As it said in the mail I've only done work on the first paragraph so far, so the bits on paragraph 2 are still very much WIP. I'm keeping a close eye on the readability of things to avoid odd line breaks or breaking up words. Thanks Dave ---------------------------------------- > Date: Tue, 22 May 2007 12:41:59 +0200 > From: niels.reedijk@xxxxxxxxx > To: haiku-doc@xxxxxxxxxxxxx > Subject: [haiku-doc] Re: First diff for List.dox > > 2007/5/22, David Weizades : > > > > Hi all, > > > > Attached is the first diff for the file List.dox in > > /haiku/docs/user/support It applies fine here and all lines are proper 80 > > chars. Only done the first paragraph so far, still getting my bearings. The > > next set of changes should come sooner as I pick up momentum. :) > > I've got a few more points on this one: > > - * Documentation by: > - * Niels Sascha Reedijk > + * Authors: > + * Niels Sascha Reedijk > + * > + * Proofreading: > + * David Weizades > + * > > The authors and proofreaders should be indented by two spaces, so > that's three in total after the asterix. > > - In general, if you know your list is only going to contain a fixed maximum > - number of items, pass that value. If you expect your list to have very few > + In general, if you know your list is only going to contain a > maximum number of > + items, you can pass that value. If you expect your list to have very > +few > items, it's probably safe to choose a low number. This is as to prevent the > > This change will create one new line with only the word 'few' on it > which looks a bit ugly. > According to my column count it can simply be appended to the previous line. > > I hope these comments help! > > Niels > _________________________________________________________________ Visa vem du är: utforma din egen hemsida precis som du vill ha den med Live.com. http://www.live.com/getstarted