Hi Maria, Can you send the current copy of the 1st 2 chapters? I assume that Leo has revised these since my original edit. Sorry for the trouble. Blessings, Bruce On Saturday, July 5, 2014 9:15 AM, María Cristina Azcona <mcrisazcona@xxxxxxxxx> wrote: > > > >Ernesto Kanak, Kurt, Surendra and Julia, Susana >Ammar, Harold, Ada, Lida, Glenn, Bruce > > >and everyone in the GHA book > > >please send corrections in red on page 4 on and on any other page > > >please avoid referring to any other aspect of the GHA apart from > > > >Please send LEO and us the review of the first 2 chapters before the end of >July > > > >Please respond if you agree to add this forum dialogues on reviewing >I VOTE NO > > > > > > >I am correcting page 4 where it says (see in red below) it should say any >quote by JESUS CHRIST too (John 14:27) Peace I leave with you; my peace I give >you. I do not give to you as the world gives. Do not let your hearts be >troubled and do not be afraid. > > > > > > >The key philosophical conclusion of the ABC of Harmony is the beginning of global peace science and its existence as source of revolutionary thinking. In fact, this was anticipated by Confucius and Buddha: >The wise sage Confucius said, >"When there is beauty in the character, >There is harmony in the home" >The enlightened one, the Buddha added, >"When there is harmony in the home, >There is order in the nation, >When there is order in the nation >There is peace in the world". >it must be added – Abdul Kalam [2] > > > > > > > > > > > > > > >I added this because a peace book NEEDS TO DO CITATIONS on a global >perspective. half the planet is Christian so it is important to add Christ >remarks >If they are missing, the christian readers will feel unconfortable. >because to all Christians like me, Christ means peace in your heart > > > >María Cristina Azcona >@macazcona > > > > >María Cristina Azcona > >