Jerry Stratton wrote: >>Dear Sir or Madam, > > Find out who the hell you're writing to. Unfortunately, I don't really know who I am writing to: on the contact us page there is only a link to "ghostgames@xxxxxxxxxxxx". Any suggestions for finding out or a better introduction? >>We would like to point out that there are concerns with the OGL, and >>licenses like it. Please see here: >> >>http://www.freeroleplay.org/faq.php#OGL > > I agree with the others; this would be a good place to put "for example, > the OGL requires you to sign on to limitations to your own work which you > otherwise would not have to agree to, such as a definition of "Product > Identity" that serves mainly to close off re-use of terminology from > downriver products--including re-use by original contributors such as Grey > Ghost Games. > > Other problem: > > The OGL allows others to use your work while keeping all portions original > to them closed. > > The OGL appears mainly to have been designed to allow closed-work > providers to benefit from OGL products. > > (Note, make sure I'm not wrong about the above three. You can and should > point them to further information about confusing aspects of the OGL, but > in the letter everything should be certain.) Thanks for this: will add to draft and re-send to the list for further review. >>If you have not done so already, we would like to reconsider. > > I assume you meant "we would like you to reconsider"; Ta :) -- Ricardo Gladwell President, Free Roleplaying Community http://www.freeroleplay.org/ president@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx