[freeroleplay] Re: [FRINGE] Character creation draft
- From: Ricardo Gladwell <president@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- To: FRPGC <freeroleplay@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- Date: Mon, 06 Sep 2004 23:41:24 +0100
Hi Jerry,
Thanks for your feedback. Looks like I was a little slap-dash publishing
that chapter. I've made a few edits to tighten things up a bit and take
on board your comments, as well as adding a bit more detail. Please
download from here:
http://www.freeroleplay.org/downloads/cc.pdf
If you have OpenOffice.org you can download the whole book (so far):
http://www.freeroleplay.org/downloads/fringe.basics.en.sxw
You're especially corr
On Mon, 2004-09-06 at 17:34, Jerry Stratton wrote:
> 1) It looks like the POV changes at random points
I just noticed the same myself and it sounds awful. I've amended and
will continue to be more aware of this as I write more of FRINGE.
> 5) You use "for example" in a manner that,
> as a reader of role-playing games, really annoys me.
Sorry, I'm so used to writing and reading technical documentation I'm
starting to talk like a book on computer programming. I also have a
tendency to over-use "for examples" in other works. I will continue to
be more aware of this :)
Once again, thanks for your feedback. I'd also be interested to know
what you think of the mechanics, such as they exist, for FRINGE
characters.
--
Ricardo Gladwell
President, Free Roleplaying Community
http://www.freeroleplay.org/
president@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Other related posts:
