Thanks Carl for your feedback, I appreciate it.
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From: "Carl Jarvis" <carjar82@xxxxxxxxx>
To: <blind-democracy@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
Cc: "Mostafa" <mostafa.almahdy@xxxxxxxxx>
Sent: Thursday, August 10, 2017 4:20 PM
Subject: [blind-democracy] Re: Terror development
Good Thursday morning, Mostafa(Bob),
While you and I have no common ground for discussing an All Wise
Creator, nonetheless, I do want to offer a thought or two regarding
this, and prior offerings you have posted.
While I have seen great progress in your command of the English
language, you appear to have plateaued at a level that is still
difficult to track your intended thoughts. Strictly focusing on the
language, and not the content, I would make a couple of suggestions.
1. Be certain of the words you choose. Often I notice that you
include words that clearly are used to impress readers with your
education. But they are confusing because they have meanings that are
out of place in your writing.
2. Redouble your study of the English language. English is not an
easy language to embrace. So many almost invisible shadings of
meaning. There are English Speaking groups around the world, if you
can find one. Otherwise, English and American TV offers practical
usage...just skip the commercials(smile).
As for what you have titled, An Editorial, well, Mostafa, it is really
a Tirade. In part, I believe that this is due to your need to improve
upon your English skills. But what explodes from out of your writing
is an angry defense of your Faith and of your Culture.
It is difficult at best for we who are deeply committed to our
Beliefs, to be objective. Challenging and boasting only force those
we wish to enlighten, into a angry defensive position of their own
Beliefs. This does not bring us to the conference table where we
might sit together and discuss our differences, and seek ways of
living in peace and respect.
Mostafa, you and I will never convince one another of the "rightnous"
of our Way of Life, but we can learn to respect our differences, and
live in Peace. Do not confuse those Westerners who live under
War-Like governments, with the War Mongers. And please, try hard not
to be a War Monger yourself.
Cordially,
Carl Jarvis
On 8/9/17, Bob <ebob824@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
Hello, I just finished rewriting and editing this
thorough editorial on terror development. You may read this carefully and
then, we may discuss. Bob or Mostafa
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