Hi, Valerie, it makes sense to me to make sure each step on the instructions has its own paragraph. As for asterisks, I don't know about that, but the separate paragraphs would be dandy. Give my best to Nichole. Regards, Kim. -----Original Message----- From: bksvol-discuss-bounce@xxxxxxxxxxxxx [mailto:bksvol-discuss-bounce@xxxxxxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Valerie Maples Sent: Monday, November 01, 2010 9:24 PM To: bksvol-discuss@xxxxxxxxxxxxx Subject: [bksvol-discuss] Re: Cookbook question Hi, Kim! Neither numbers or tags, just a dot between steps. I have decided to be grateful for her time consuming work of placing each on its own line and put a single asterisk between paragraphs. Hopefully it will read well this way! Valerie On Nov 1, 2010, at 11:18 PM, Kim Friedman wrote: > Hi, Valerie, in the paragraphs giving instructions, are there numbered > steps or are there little tags like: Adding Wet Ingredients: Frying > the > chicken: that sort of thing? The red dots wouldn't mean anything to me > but numbered steps would provided they're in the printed text. Regards, > Kim Friedman. > > -----Original Message----- > From: bksvol-discuss-bounce@xxxxxxxxxxxxx > [mailto:bksvol-discuss-bounce@xxxxxxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Valerie > Maples > Sent: Monday, October 25, 2010 6:32 PM > To: bksvol-discuss@xxxxxxxxxxxxx > Subject: [bksvol-discuss] Cookbook question > > > I am proof reading Jamie Oliver's Food Revolution from an off list > volunteer and have a question. It appears to be an exceptional scan, > especially for a cookbook. I think the scanner is totally blind, but > she did something amazing, if so, that I think is very helpful, but > different from the print. In the print, the directions are in a > paragraph with red dots between each direction, upwards to ten or more > in a paragraph. Anyway, it appears at least as far as I have looked, > that she put a paragraph break in place of each dot, making it more > readable. I am highly inclined to retain that since it is visually > MUCH easier to follow. If I do, though, how to indicate the print > paragraphs, a single asterisk? > > Also, there are tons of gorgeous pictures, but will everyone be > heartbroken if I stick to the cookbook part since it is like 372 very > large pages? Or, if we split credit, does someone want to do picture > descriptions? I would love to get this up before Nichole has her > surgery and pictures would be out of the question in that time frame. > > Thanks for any help and guidance! > Valerie To unsubscribe from this list send a blank Email to > bksvol-discuss-request@xxxxxxxxxxxxx > put the word 'unsubscribe' by itself in the subject line. To get a > list of available commands, put the word 'help' by itself in the > subject line. > > To unsubscribe from this list send a blank Email to > bksvol-discuss-request@xxxxxxxxxxxxx > put the word 'unsubscribe' by itself in the subject line. To get a > list of available commands, put the word 'help' by itself in the > subject line. > To unsubscribe from this list send a blank Email to bksvol-discuss-request@xxxxxxxxxxxxx put the word 'unsubscribe' by itself in the subject line. To get a list of available commands, put the word 'help' by itself in the subject line. To unsubscribe from this list send a blank Email to bksvol-discuss-request@xxxxxxxxxxxxx put the word 'unsubscribe' by itself in the subject line. To get a list of available commands, put the word 'help' by itself in the subject line.