[bksvol-discuss] Caldecott winner submitted
- From: Cindy <popularplace@xxxxxxxxx>
- To: bksvol-discuss@xxxxxxxxxxxxx, bookshare-discuss@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
- Date: Sun, 22 May 2005 13:54:32 -0700 (PDT)
I've just submitted Tuesday. It has a total of 12
words, about half of which are times of night.
Whoever validates this (Shelley? Sue?), PLEASE,PLEASE
change the descriptions in whatever way you wish to
make them more "visible" to the blind reader, and/or
less wordy. Perhaps the descriptions of the people and
their clothing is too detailed and is unnecessary to
the story.
If you have any questions about the pictures -- if the
descriptions need clarification -- please contact me
(popularplace@xxxxxxxxx). Also, please let me know
when you've uploaded the file. I'll keep the book
until then in case there are any questions.
After I wrote each description I spell-checked it and
read it over once or twice, making changes. I couldn't
near to re-read the whole thing again, though. I leave
it up to the validator.
Sue, I didn't know what your classmates were laughing
at until I got to the picture of the old lady sleeping
and all the frogs engrossed in the television program.
Then I chuckled. It's the expressions on their faces,
but I don't know if I was able to describe them
adequately. But maybe your professor made faces or
something to cause the class to laugh.
Cindy
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