Dear Lissi, Yes, skipping lines between paragraphs, if there is a lot of dialogue on a page, can cause difficulties with line length. Sometimes that can be fixed by making the the side margins shorter, which makes the lines longer. Sometimes, though, nothing helps.I've gone quite a way into a validation skipping lines between pragraphs only to find that nothing I do will work on a particular page and then I've had to go back and close the spaces and indent. smile. Love, Cindy --- Estelnalissi <airadil@xxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote: > Dear Cindy, > > If you held on line grammar and proofing classes I'd > enroll and never miss a > one. In lieu of that, I'm heading straight for the > Bookshare site to > download, "Eats, Shoots and Leaves." which I've read > is a clever book. > Thanks for the heads up that it's in the collection. > > I had them fooled after high school and > proficiencied college English. it > had to have been a close call because I've never > used ;s and :s correctly > and make up most of my grammar as I go along. It's > never too late to improve > one's use of punctuation, right? You can look for > proper use of those little > marks at the right end of the home keys in my future > questions. > > About the skipping lines to indicate those dashed > quotes, would the added > lines make the pages too long? If not, I'll > definitely hold that thought > when this situation presents itself again and I'm > sure it will. I've > reworked the first fourth of the book I'm validating > 3 or 4 times. I'm > losing track. I've done and redone the dashes, m > dashes, and minuses and > think I've got them right. After starting with 8, > then switching to 7 I've > finally settled on 6 space indents for quotes and 3 > for paragraphs with all > other lines flush with the left hand margin. That's > it for this one, but if > skipping lines to indicate unusual quotes like these > won't reek havoc with > the pagination, I'll do it that way in future. It > will be much quicker than > spacing 6 times for every quote. > > It's been busy and informative on this list today. > > Always with love, > > Lissi > ----- Original Message ----- > From: "Cindy" <popularplace@xxxxxxxxx> > To: <bksvol-discuss@xxxxxxxxxxxxx> > Sent: Saturday, June 03, 2006 7:29 PM > Subject: [bksvol-discuss] Re: All this talk of > dashes I thought I would dash > a note > > > > Hi, Katie. > > > > I'm not sure your example is a good one. It looks > as > > if waterfall is hyphenated because the word > waterfall > > came at the end of the sentence. the blue-water > would > > mean that the water in the fall is blue. > > > > Depending on when and where a book was written, > some > > words that we today do not hyphenate, like "today" > > were hyphenated--"to-day." When I come across a > book > > like that I put that comment in the long > synopsis--I > > do the same when the words are spelled the English > way > > rather than the American way, e.g. when words that > in > > American end in o r end in o u r , like the word > > honor. In a book that Mickey is currently > validating > > (I'm helping supply some pages), sometimes the > > American spelling is used and sometimes the > English; > > it isn't consistent. I think she'll put that > > explanation in. > > > > But back to you hyphen question: when one > adjective is > > created from two or more adjectives, or from an > > adjective and a noun, a hyphen is used to indicate > > that it is one word. For example, a red-eyed bull; > a > > twenty-four-year-old girl. In some cases not > > hyphenating can lead to a different > > meaning--unfortunately not in the examples I gave. > > Here's a quote from the seciton on hyphens in the > book > > Eats, Shoots and Leaves, an amusing book about > grammar > > that is in the bookshare collection: "if it's not > > extra-marital sex (with a hyphen), it is perhaps > > extra marital sex, which is quite a different > bunch of > > coconuts." Another example she gives is "the > > pickled-herring merchant," who "can hold his head > > high," but a pickled herring merchant might be > > arrested for intoxication, smile > > > > hth > > > > Cindy > > > > > > > > > > > > __________________________________________________ > > Do You Yahoo!? > > Tired of spam? Yahoo! Mail has the best spam > protection around > > http://mail.yahoo.com > > To unsubscribe from this list send a blank Email > to > > bksvol-discuss-request@xxxxxxxxxxxxx > > put the word 'unsubscribe' by itself in the > subject line. To get a list > > of available commands, put the word 'help' by > itself in the subject line. > > > > > > To unsubscribe from this list send a blank Email to > bksvol-discuss-request@xxxxxxxxxxxxx > put the word 'unsubscribe' by itself in the subject > line. To get a list of available commands, put the > word 'help' by itself in the subject line. > > __________________________________________________ Do You Yahoo!? Tired of spam? Yahoo! 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