Oops, I obviously didn't get my point across. I was attempting to say, with minimal changes to the text, that the investigation of the police would be critical of them, i.e. police-critical. -----Original Message----- From: Rhonda Bracey A 'critical incident investigation' is the correct term in OHS parlance, so 'police-critical' etc. doesn't work. Better would be 'Police are undertaking a critical incident investigation after a second officer-related shooting in a week.' Or something like that. Rhonda ************************************************** To view the austechwriter archives, go to www.freelists.org/archives/austechwriter To unsubscribe, send a message to austechwriter-request@xxxxxxxxxxxxx with "unsubscribe" in the Subject field (without quotes). To manage your subscription (e.g., set and unset DIGEST and VACATION modes) go to www.freelists.org/list/austechwriter To contact the list administrator, send a message to austechwriter-admins@xxxxxxxxxxxxx **************************************************