Dear Mammuts,
Well done! Music is good, mix of shots from different locations is nice, works
well I think.
The subtitles with the interview with Prof Giorgio start a bit late so my first
impression was that they were missing...
Not sure if you can deal with the comments by Remi... but he makes some good
points.
Maybe at the end we can make a list of things we produced? So for example 27
cases studies on UA enterprises, inventory of educatial offer, 5 video
tutorials, research on state of the art of UA entrepreneurship, education and
training needs and pilot course resources. So this gives people an incentive to
visit the website..?
Thanks for this and happy it will already be available for our multiplier event!
Femke
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Van: Remi Kahane <remi.kahane@xxxxxxxx>
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Verzonden: 6-3-2017 16:06
Onderwerp: [ugt] Re: UGT final video
Dear Michele and Alessandro,
Dear UGT Partners,
Good job, really clear and synthetic presentation of what is UGT. The
objectif is targeted. May I give 4 suggestions to may be better
illustrate some aspects of UA business:
1. The images in introduction do not highlight the urbanizing
environment, may be mix with images from the NL where buildings around
were more obvious.
2. Urban agriculture is not only about crops, it is also about animal
husbandry (poultry in Rotterdam, aquaponic as well), at least one
shooting or one image should mention it.
3. UA business is not only food production, it is also marketing,
packaging, processing, linking producers and consumers. The Eta Beta
retailing, the restaurant in Rotterdam, are good examples. The mushroom
case study is not exploring the aspect of city waste recycling, not
obvious that what we see in growing on coffee waste...
4. Gender balance: among the three speakers, one at least should be a
woman! Best regards,
Remi
Le 06/03/2017 à 15:23, michele mellara a écrit :
Dear UGT partner,
we send you the link and password in order to watch UGT final video.
It took a bit to come to the end of the editing. It was not simple to be
synthetic and exhaustive without be boring for the viewers.
We did some video text screening with an italian audience and the short worked
quite well.
We hope it will be the same with you.
You should watch it and be back to us with your comments within the 15th of
march.
It's 5 minutes long, it won't take too long to you
link: https://ln.sync.com/dl/262fc9b70#5xff6ig7-84ady5i6-3vpn8snb-w28mwp3d
password: train
All the best,
Michele and Alessandro
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