[TechAssist] Re: Fw: my website-please comment
- From: "Tel-Tek Electronics" <teltek3@xxxxxxxxxxxx>
- To: <techassist@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- Date: Sat, 21 Jan 2006 19:40:37 -0500
Al;
I agree with Larry.
Hitting this, I'm not quite sure if your selling Real Estate or offering
Service.
Some of the items you are advertising..such as..
Free Phone Service. need to be refined.
Try to keep "FREE" out of your website.
Remember Jeff and I had this discussion about "Free Estimates", and I
presume we both lost.
Keep "Free" out of all adds, including Websites. America and Google use that
word like a Magnet.
-Ed-
Ed Gaidies
Tel-Tek Electronics
Ontario-Canada
teltek3@xxxxxxxxxxxx
----- Original Message -----
From: "Larry E" <videotech@xxxxxxxxxxxx>
To: <techassist@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
Sent: Saturday, January 21, 2006 6:48 PM
Subject: [TechAssist] Re: Fw: my website-please comment
> Al, Heres my 2 cents worth of criticism,
> 1. wheres your store address? Your forcing the customer to call you just
> to
> find out where your shop is, while
> your explaining your directions you could be working on a set actually
> making money, and another potential
> customer is getting a busy signal.
> 2. get rid of the real estate (or put it on a link at the bottom)
> 3. " Serving you since 1969" or "37 years experience" sounds way better
> to
> me.
> 4. I would move the credit card logos up towards the top not at the bottom
> 5. You have 9 items in a list under the heading "Al`s tv offers" why not
> move the first 5 items to the left and the last 4
> to the right of the first 5 so they don`t have to scroll down so far? This
> would also make room for more info you might think of later. Hope you
> don`t
> take offense, just suggestions, Hope you do well with it, Larry E
>
> Larry Eastman
> American TV & Electronics
> Crystal River, Fl. 34428
> ----- Original Message -----
> From: "Al L" <alleathe@xxxxxxxxxxx>
> To: <techassist@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
> Sent: Saturday, January 21, 2006 10:28 AM
> Subject: [TechAssist] Fw: my website-please comment
>
>
>>
>>
>>
>> > Please comment, good or bad, I can take it! TIA
>> >
>> > Al Leatherman
>> > Al's TV
>> > 224 US Highway 46
>> > Mine Hill, NJ 07803
>> > 973-361-5796
>> > 973-476-0854 (cell)
>> > WWW.ALS-TV.NET
>>
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