[TechAssist] Re: Fw: my website-please comment

Al, Heres my 2 cents worth of criticism,
1.  wheres your store address? Your forcing the customer to call you just to
find out where your shop is, while
your explaining your directions you could be working on a set actually
making money, and another potential
customer is getting a busy signal.
2.  get rid of the real estate (or put it on a link at the bottom)
3. " Serving you since 1969" or "37 years experience"  sounds way better to
me.
4. I would move the credit card logos up towards the top not at the bottom
5. You have 9 items in a list under the heading "Al`s tv offers" why not
move the first 5 items to the left and the last 4
to the right of the first 5 so they don`t have to scroll down so far? This
would also make room for more info you might think of later. Hope you don`t
take offense, just suggestions, Hope you do well with it, Larry E

Larry Eastman
American TV & Electronics
Crystal River, Fl. 34428
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Subject: [TechAssist] Fw: my website-please comment


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> > Please comment, good or bad, I can take it! TIA
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> > Al Leatherman
> > Al's TV
> > 224 US Highway 46
> > Mine Hill, NJ 07803
> > 973-361-5796
> > 973-476-0854 (cell)
> > WWW.ALS-TV.NET
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