[sac-board] Re: SAC Handout for 2007

Hi Paul,
Thanks--good luck--Susan


>From: Paul Dickson <paul@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
>Reply-To: sac-board@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
>To: sac-board@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
>Subject: [sac-board] Re: SAC Handout for 2007
>Date: Tue, 21 Nov 2006 14:00:06 -0700
>
>On Tue, 21 Nov 2006 13:30:03 -0500, Tom Polakis wrote:
>
> > "SAC members meet about every four weeks for both general meetings
> > and star parties, and regularly conducts and supports public
> > programs on astronomy."
> >
> > "Members is plural" so you have to change the verbs to "conduct" and
> > "support" or better yet, two sentences: "...and star parties.  SAC
> > regularly conducts and supports..."  Also, "monthly" may not be
> > exactly correct, but it's far easier to read than "about every four
> > weeks".
>
>Thanks!
>
>I merged in most of your suggestions.  The new printer arrived after I
>posted my original message and I was able to read the handout in a
>different context (meaning printed).
>
>Of the above suggestion, I changed the "about every four weeks" to
>"regularly", then in the next sentence, I changed that "regularly" to
>"also":
>     SAC members meet regularly for both general meetings and star parties.
>     SAC also conducts and supports public programs on astronomy.
>
>Thanks Susan.  The words offers and provides were equally good, so it was
>pretty much a coin toss to decide.
>
>The map on page 2 became more readable at 600 dpi than at 300 dpi.
>
>       -Paul
>
>

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