And here they are. I was even sensible enough to grab an SVN copy and check that (or the test versions) for each of these! (??) 02fotw kaiwisdm: to the Hammerdal -> to Hammerdal (??) 02fotw 6: post A little -> post. A little (??) 02fotw 37: West Bank Walk -> East Bank Walk [tp: Just a possibility; you are west of the River Dorn at this stage, though not on its banks. The street doesn't go to the river banks, either; section 323 strongly implies that it ends and becomes Lookout Street. I'm not sure what else the street name could be referring to. A bank of the financial kind?] (??) 02fotw 79: there is much preparation for -> there is much to prepare for [tp: As per section 123] (??) 02fotw 86: Westbank Wharf -> Eastbank Wharf [tp: This one's more certain: the geography clearly indicates that you are on the east bank of the River Dorn at this stage. While we're at it, should we standardise X Bank vs. Xbank?] (??) 02fotw 242: they are determined to destroy you before you reach Durenor -> [tp: Umm, you're already in Durenor... perhaps "reach Sommerlund" or "Holmgard"? Or "they were determined"? Or simply "the Darklords are bent on thwarting your quest", as per section 79?] (ft) 02fotw 289: [tp: it's entirely possible to get here without the Seal, e.g. 4 -> 342 -> 56 -> 143 -> 289. Perhaps a footnote, pointing this out and recommending that you simply turn to 186 if you do not have the Seal.] (??) 02fotw 298: points from Your -> points from your (ft) 02fotw 298: [tp: In section 189, you both tumble down the stairs before the combat; therefore the footnote is unnecessary.] (er) 04tcod map.png: MAAKEN MINER -> MAAKEN MINES [tp: Also, am I the only person that cares that Sommerlund doesn't actually " (ne) 04tcod errata: Replaced ‘despatched’ with ‘dispatched’. -> Replaced ‘despatches’ with ‘dispatches’. (ne) 04tcod errata: Replaced ‘make you’ with ‘make you’. -> Replaced ‘make you’ with ‘makes you’. (??) 09tcof 24: brotherhood -> Brotherhood (??) 09tcof 74: brotherhood -> Brotherhood (??) 19wb map: Fort Durnspa, to the northeast -> Fort Durnspa, to the northwest [tp: Also, the bearings to Toran and Anskavern seem inaccurate. Holmgard to Toran is more northerly than Holmgard to Anskavern, yet the former is called "northwest" and the latter, "north by northeast".] (ft) 19wb 35: If you have ever visited the Graveyard of the Ancients -> [tp: You may have entered the Graveyard without encountering the Crypt Spawn mentioned in the next section (s.182). Okay, so that's a very detailed piece of trivia to expect players to remember -- worse even than knowing if they met Prarg at Cetza, I think -- but it may still be worth footnoting, here or in section 182; it does no harm for the player to be mistaken either way.] (??) 19wb 61: and have attained the rank of Grand Crown -> [tp: It is unnecessary to check your rank; you must be a Grand Crown to have reached this section.] (??) 19wb 99: reproachfully -> ruefully [tp: To me, at least, "reproachfully" implies reproach for those to whom you're speaking, not for yourself as is clearly meant here. Same goes for the parallel sections 154 and 223... any others?] (??) 19wb 178: [tp: You used Animal Mastery, not Animal Control, to get here.] (??) 21votm 150: After having heard her story and satisfied yourself -> After you have heard her story and satisfied yourself [tp: While I get the grammatical intent -- "...having heard ... and [having] satisfied..." -- I find it very awkward. It reads like "satisfied" parallels "having" and so they seem mismatched. And "After having heard" is also troublesome; in fact I think it might even be the source of my unease with this sentence, as "Having heard... and satisfied..." reads much better to me.] (??) 21votm toc: The Central Route -> The Coastal Route [tp: likewise for map and maplarge] (??) 21votm 225: Nexus and curing -> Nexus and Curing (??) 27v map: dissecting -> bisecting (??) 01gstw equipmnt: Carried in -> carried in [tp: None of the others start with a capital after the dash.] Oh, and I've found some problems with the time frames the text describes in 02fotw, but perhaps fixing that would be overstepping our mandate... -- Tim Pederick