[projectaon] Re: Lone Wolf 10th Anniversary Calendar
- From: "O'Toole, Laurence (2000)" <Laurence.OToole.2000@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- To: "projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx" <projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- Date: Sun, 10 Apr 2011 21:16:48 +0000
Simon Osborne wrote:
> Project Aon are pleased to announce that we have been granted permission
> by Random House and Joe Dever to make a PDF facsimile of this rare piece
> of Lone Wolf memorabilia available on our site.
A few small things.
Page 1:
The PA credits seem to alter between past and present tense. I'm not saying
this is wrong. I just cannot see the rule that makes the distinction.
Technically, (I contacted and) we got permission from Random House, not Red Fox.
Page 3:
"Joe Dever is the prolific author of more than 40 fantasy and science fiction
adventure books."
The 'the' implies that no other author has achieved this.
red Fox -> Red Fox
Red Fox are proud -> Red Fox is proud
Lone Wolf 22 -> and Lone Wolf 22
(maybe?)
Page 8:
CELEBRATING A DECADE OF -> The 'OF' looks to be misaligned to me.
Cerulean
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