[projectaon] Re: Grand Master comment period [Book 14]

On Tue, Apr 10, 2012 at 7:47 AM, Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> On 10/04/2012 00:15, Jonathan Blake wrote:
>>
>> On Fri, Apr 6, 2012 at 4:19 PM, Jonathan Blake<jonathan@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
>>  wrote:
>>
>>> I'll work on putting together
>>> some diffs for the GM books soon.
>>
>>
>> Done.
>>
>> http://projectaon.org/staff/jonathan/diffs/
>
>
> BOOK 14:
>
> (er) 38, 44, 51, 80, 171, 172, 343: Their posture, and the nature of their
> wounds, tell -> Their posture, and the nature of their wounds, tells [so: Or
> "Their posture and the nature of their wounds tell".]

Hmm. I see what you mean, but it seems OK to me but that's subjective.
Anyone have any more authoritative opinions?

> (er) 62, 263: possess the Sommerswerd -> wield the Sommerswerd

done

> (er) 64, 138, 261, 285: The psychic residues of pain and terror left by
> these luckless victims presses in -> The psychic residues of pain and terror
> left by these luckless victims press in

done

> (er) 87, 204: [so: Speech should be in <thought> tags (cf. surrounding
> Sections 100, 204, 336).]

done

> (ne) Errata: Magi-magc -> Magi-magic

done

--
Jon

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