[projectaon] Re: Grand Master comment period [Book 14]
- From: Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx>
- To: projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
- Date: Tue, 10 Apr 2012 15:47:14 +0100
On 10/04/2012 00:15, Jonathan Blake wrote:
On Fri, Apr 6, 2012 at 4:19 PM, Jonathan Blake<jonathan@xxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
I'll work on putting together
some diffs for the GM books soon.
Done.
http://projectaon.org/staff/jonathan/diffs/
BOOK 14:
(er) 38, 44, 51, 80, 171, 172, 343: Their posture, and the nature of
their wounds, tell -> Their posture, and the nature of their wounds,
tells [so: Or "Their posture and the nature of their wounds tell".]
(er) 62, 263: possess the Sommerswerd -> wield the Sommerswerd
(er) 64, 138, 261, 285: The psychic residues of pain and terror left by
these luckless victims presses in -> The psychic residues of pain and
terror left by these luckless victims press in
(er) 87, 204: [so: Speech should be in <thought> tags (cf. surrounding
Sections 100, 204, 336).]
(ne) Errata: Magi-magc -> Magi-magic
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Simon Osborne
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