[projectaon] Editor's Companion Submission

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   From: Keith Sheldon <Relenoir@xxxxxxxx>
   Date: 20:48:31 on Tuesday, July 27, 2004
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(er) 16tlov 9: panther you leap -> panther, you leap
(er) 16tlov 9: appear but the  -> appear, but the
(er) 16tlov 9: in hand you climb -> in hand, you climb
(er) 16tlov 8: boat which is -> boat, which is
(er) 16tlov 8: first-floor ruins of -> first floor ruins of 
(er) 16tlov 6: upper tier and -> upper tier, and
(er) 16tlov 3: Knight, or higher, turn to 31. -> Knight or higher, turn to 31.
(er) 16tlov 2: of animal kinship.  -> of Animal Kinship. [KS: The Kai 
Disciplines were always capitalized in books 1-5.]
(er) 16tlov 2: the first-floor window -> the first floor window
(er) 16tlov 1: skyship Skyrider. -> skyship, Skyrider.

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