[projectaon] Re: Editor's Companion Submission

All corrections below are minor.  Don't let it delay the book!  :D

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The following was sent from the Editor's Companion form
   From: Andre Davidson <andre.davidson@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
   Date: 18:58:23 on Wednesday, June 7, 2006
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(??) 17tdoi imprvdsc: Arrow-like missile, launched by a Sun Lord. -> 
Arrow-like missile launched by a Sun Lord. [ad: Again, just a grammatical 
correction.  I don't believe this comma should be here.]
(??) 17tdoi equipmnt: add 3 to any number that you pick from the Random 
Number Table, when using the Bow. -> add 3 to any number that you pick 
from the Random Number Table when using the Bow. [ad: grammatically 
speaking, I don't believe a comma should be there.]
(??) 17tdoi equipmnt: Quiver (Special Items) This contains six Arrows, 
record them on your Weapons List. -> Quiver (Special Items) This contains 
six Arrows. Record them on your Weapons List. [ad: It would seem to me 
that instead of a comma there should be a period here or at the very least 
a semi-colon.  But under Laumspur potion there are two sentences, so 
seperate sentences would keep it consistent.]

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